ONYX: BOLT 2 - The Magical Story
The final edit for the text I'll be placing in the storybook, before beginning to work on the full novel. This is a shortened, very brief overview of ONYX: BOLT 2, in all its edited glory, for you dudes to read and review! Each star is a new page, with a matching illustration when that time comes... I'm open for suggestions, but I'm not going to add any new characters, so don't ask me to put your fursona or OC in the story - I'm not going to do it. It'd ruin my solid plotline... Anyway, enjoy!
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It was a stormy, rainy night and Mark was all alone, fired from his job with no one to comfort him. Suddenly, a frightened tan and red-haired puppy sprung from under a bench and into his arms. She was so cute!
Mark took her home that night and fed her, then kept her warm and showed her his favourite TV show, BOLT.
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Mark named his companion Onyx, after his wife's onyx cl
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